The look is amazing and you're really talented to have made that. The colors blend perfectly and look good together.
If anything the mascara on the lower lid looks a little untidy (I don't think it matters or maybe it's just the eyelashes, that are impossible to do anything with) And also the look definitely won't go with any dress, which can be a downside. The eyebrows are very dark (Possibly to dark depending on the person's hair-color and skin color. I of course can't see the hair and maybe it fits perfectly ) All in all you've done splendidly and the work is extraordinary
I must say maybe this critique was a very bad one and I suck at doing eyeshadow myself, but I saw you requesting critique and decided to offer some
First off, I love the gold colour with that cranberry red. It's a gorgeous combination, and they really go together well. Also, I like the crisp edge on the outer corner and the wing shape you created. The way the dark liner blends into the very jet-black corner adds to the look. I personally like really natural lashes, and the fact that these lashes here leave me guessing is really nice too. Bridal looks are typically kept really natural and simple, and this is an unexpected eye makeup, and very stunning! It's not as typical as the neutral bridal looks.